Woah...
I'm a hetrosexual but dude you nearly had me for a minute. I reminds me of the stuff I used to write. I love every bit of it except potentially the "Don't you know that someday you'll be mine" bridge bit, simply because it wasn't mastered as well as your voice deserves credit for. Make this 4/4. I hope you make music your life.
That overly creative bridge was really difficult to say the least. I was a child who would not sit still. Most of the song flowed like a song should but getting through the bridge was a rocky terrain. So it was hard for me to know I had to mastering right for a section that despised me so much... lol I sure would like to make music my life.
Love it.
You blow my mind. I love this melody, it's like an eastern version of Solvieg's Song. 3/3 songs of yours I've heard now that have been beyond brilliant. I usually lean towards classical music without vocals in that kind of context, but you've swayed me. You also make me wish I could sing (decently).
Oh I'm sure you could sing well with practice. I've heard tone deaf people sing awesome after some training, it's true.
Gorgeous!
If I heard this without being told you're not Chinese, I wouldn't have suspected a thing. The subtle reverberation on your vocals does wonders. Dude I'm a total fan, you deserve to be heard, and you definitely deserved first place. Talent.
Yes, I take pride in my stance on reverb. lol There's always gotta be something in the reverb category. I only deserved first because there wasn't a whole lot of hard competition. x]
Halleluyoooo
Woah, I love it. I don't know about the chorus bits, it works but I kinda wanna know how it would sound without it. Either way, you can sing something serious, and I agree with Miss Arsenic, you phrase it naturally and your vibrato is genuine. One comment, would be you say "you" and not 'ya', I dunno why that bothers me so much but it stands out by not rhyming. I mean, I can't sing for peanuts, but I am certain phrasing is really hard, I mean it's a profession itself let alone doing it musically. I have to say it is my favorite version of this piece, you couldn't have started it better. I have to hear your other music.
Woah thank you for reviewing so many pieces of my music. With great reviews nonetheless. The reason I said ya instead of you was cause I had been listening to a particular version where the artist says 'ya' and so originally I wouldn't have said that, but I was influenced too much by other version. lol And I also kinda thought it sounded need in that particular place because '...do ya' rhymes with '..lujah'. Actually now that I think about it, the author probably intended 'ya' because it always ends up rhyming with hallelujah - do ya, overthrew ya, knew ya, fool ya, etc.
Brilliant
Be proud of this. I love the pace, I love where it takes itself and how it moves. It's so gentle and moving and I swear, if I was jewish I'd still love this.
Awesome.
Wow. I freaking love classical and I love mocha, but I never thought they would collide. Looks like I found another awesome composer too, hurray! Now I have to know, if you don't mind divulging, what do you use and how do you use it? Did I mention this is awesome?
Frankly, I never drank mocha. ^^
I'm using tons of virtual instruments (Stormdrum, East West Symphonic Orchestra...etc.) and my sequencer is Cakewalk Sonar 7.
Here at NG you don't must look for awesome composers, they're everywhere. ;) But only a few are enjoying a great reputation.
Well, I'm very glad you like it, means a lot! :D
- Intero
Didn't expect a clarinet.
But it worked, as always. The beginning and 2:05 + was the standout for me. Fun fact I just puked, not blaming your song, but it was random.. It didn't seem very clashy though, but I don't think you wanted one.
It's actually a duduk there, but they do have similar sound qualities, especially when faded out like the way it is here. I'm sorry to hear you're not feeling well, I hope that passed quickly :(
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Build up to the MAX
Golly miss molly, that went from bad ass, to freaking duke nukemly bad ass again and again, I mean that really escalated out of nowhere and I love that.
Beyond what I thought.
I have so many goosebumps. This was possibly the best pieces I've heard when it comes to composing for a story, and generating tension and building something from a foundation so powerfully. I await the animation. As of late I'd kind of settled with your work being of a high standard but being what I expect, thank you for snapping me out of it.
i'm really glad you enjoyed it Assassin :]! Truth be told I was just so happy I had a chance to compose a full length piece rather then loops. I mean it's great to be working with so many talented people but I seriously felt like I was forgetting how to create full length pieces.
It was long overdue, i'm just happy to know I can still do it.
Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
The name's Bond, Cloud McBond from Sector 6
Dude FF and 007 is exactly right Arthus, in SPACE! It's good that you got creative with some new tools. I have High-Def headphones and yeah it didn't sound too friendly, but then again the only song I've submitted sounds like a french cat being skinned with a wooden knife.
Anyway, it has a decent flow, my comment would be at points like 0:42 where it calms down for about 10 seconds, to maybe push the dynamics further but having that background flutey sound culled or dampened and just have that percussion, matter of opinion. I'm still more a fan of your piano but hey this is all good.
Thanks!
By not too friendly to you mean the quality or the chords?
A 9 by you means you wouldn't voluntarily listen (I'm guessing)
I am currently getting some GOOD software and I should have that symphonic orchestra soon on my computer!
Though for now I will stay with FL.
At 0:42 I should of cut the strings and had the synth real quiet or maybe not even there.
But thanks once again!
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